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I thought it was a very good recount you had some good adjectives and it was great because i had a picture in my head of what happened but one thing you could do next time is you could maybe see if it could be a bit more describing. But it was great.
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I thought it was a very good recount you had some good adjectives and it was great because i had a picture in my head of what happened but one thing you could do next time is you could maybe see if it could be a bit more describing. But it was great.
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